Incomplete silence
layers
and melody
Incomplete loss
time
and totality
Incomplete lies
spaces
and me
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It amuses me that even this piece of writing comes out of me when there is just one minute to midnight. 11:59 PM 7/26/2009, reads the time stamp on notepad. A minute more would have made it complete, total and full, but as the case is, that wasn't just meant to be.
Falling short of something is a strange feeling. You are not sure whether you should be happy about the fact that you made it so far, or crash down thinking that it was so close. Incomplete is a perceptive word. Half full, is also at the same time half empty.
There is a silence that sometimes engulfs me between thoughts and its incompleteness leave me wondering. Its a neither a silence of wordlessness nor that of thoughtlessness. Its something in between, just hanging there. And I am not sure what lies beyond.
Monday, July 27, 2009
Incomplete silence
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Profound. Your posts are getting more and more thoughtful day by day. Touching, I must say. Made me reflect back on my own life for a second.
Thanks buddy... keep the feedback flowing. It helps and motivates me to explore more.
-Ashutosh
Very creative.. I could never even get close to writing poetry like that
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@ Sara
Thanks. Poetry for me is a way of purging out my feelings and at times expressing things and emotions that I strongly feel. I am sure you have your owns ways of doing so, your paintings certainly indicate so.
-Ashutosh